Re: Bug or feature?
[Originally posted by dave] > Page 141: > When speaking about binmode, you discuss the difference between Windows and > UNIX. I believe you may have more commas than you want. > > "Operating systems, such as UNIX, don't make this binary/text > differentiation..." > > This implies that Windows, since it does differentiate, is not an operating > system. While I'm inclined to agree with this conclusion, I think you meant: > > "Operating systems such as UNIX don't make this binary/text differentiation..." > > It's a matter of essential vs. nonessential matter. With commas, you should be > able to remove the phrase and the meaning of the sentence remains intact. > > "Unix, like most operating systems, does not..." is probably a less clunky > phrasing. Mike, You're absolutely right. Thanks for pointing it out. > All in all, a great book. I'm on my third copy after giving away the first two. > You owe me a beer next time I'm in That London. Deal! Dave...
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