Sitten Spynne (8) [Avatar] Offline
#1
3.4:

"Let's put a stake in the ground but getting some of..." should probably be "get".

Figure 3.7:
"...to the left pain that will render..."
Steve Kinney (33) [Avatar] Offline
#2
Thanks—right now it's going through proof-reading. I'll check when Manning is done and make sure it gets settled!