Campbell Ritchie (63) [Avatar] Offline
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After reading chapter 7, the first and quickest improvement that should occur to you . . .
has a dangling participle: I would write something like
After reading chapter 7, you will realise the first and quickest improvement would be . . .
or, “Having read chapter 7...”
In the half‑hour since I started reading, the myPhone28S has become the in thing and everybody has forgotten about the 27S.