jeffmad (5) [Avatar] Offline
#1
Actual:
“Netflix once enabled users to enter taste preferences by rating content and adding preferences on genres and topics, not they are introducing likes and dislikes instead.”

Expected:
“Netflix once enabled users to enter taste preferences by rating content and adding preferences on genres and topics, now they are introducing likes and dislikes instead.”
Sven Boden (6) [Avatar] Offline
#2
Since I'm reading the MEAP v1.3 and the typo topic is already here... some more typo's:

under 1.1.2: let's users help build their taste profiles => lets users help build their taste profiles
Above figure 1.8: enables you to Rate Shows and Movies,to select => enables you to Rate Shows and Movies, to select (extra space)
Below figure 1.10: even if I made it sound like something negible here => (negible is not the right word)
Under 1.2: Michael D. Ekstrand's Cousera course => Michael D. Ekstrand's Coursera course (missing r)
Under 1.2.3: The context could also be the weather around the user or even the users mood! => The context could also be the weather around the user or even the user's mood! (missing ')
Under 1.2.4: If a user is listening to music on a snartphone => If a user is listening to music on a smartphone (smart)
Under 1.2.4: Most Sold Items, which is nonpersonalized, => Most Sold Items, which is non-personalized, (previous alinea uses it with a -)
Under 1.2.7: Netflix once enabled users to enter taste preferences by rating content and adding preferences on genres and topics, not they are introducing likes and dislikes instead. => Netflix once enabled users to enter taste preferences by rating content and adding preferences on genres and topics, now they are introducing likes and dislikes instead. (not -> now)
Under 1.4: a feel for how it is working its not enough just to look at numbers. => a feel for how it is working it's not enough just to look at numbers. (missing ')
Under 1.4: If the words Django webframeworksounds strange to you => If the words Django webframework sounds strange to you (missing space)
Under 2.2.2: A page view in a e-commerce => A page view in an e-commerce (missing n)
Under 2.2.3: first indicater of a new trend => first indicator of a new trend (e should be o)
Under 2.5.1: Getting the site up and running is faily easy, => Getting the site up and running is fairly easy, (missing r)
Under figure 2.12: To register clicks on a genre a onclick attribute => To register clicks on a genre an onclick attribute (missing n)
Under figure 2.12: We wont go too much => We won't go too much (missing ')
Under 2.6: delegates it to the moviegeek site => delegates it to the movieGEEK site (same casing for movieGEEK)
Under 2.6: Moviegeek site => MovieGEEK site (same casing for movieGEEK)
Under 2.6: , the a customer can also add something to a list => , the customer can also add something to a list (drop a)
Under 2.7: what information would be good to store on Pietro?. => what information would be good to store on Pietro? (drop .)
Under 2.7: its better to keep the level of complexity as low as possible. => it's better to keep the level of complexity as low as possible. (missing ')
Under 2.8: In this chapter, you have learned about how users interact with . => In this chapter, you have learned about how users interact with. (drop extra space)
Sven Boden (6) [Avatar] Offline
#3
Chapter 3:
- words clumped together, a little bit all over the place:
willautogenerate => will autogenerate
Butthe => But the
beginyour => begin your
withvisualizations => with visualizations
aquestion => a question
time?Or => time? Or
performance.You'll => performance. You'll
following,we => following, we
behaviorcould => behavior could
we'llbe => we'll be
Opportunityindicates => Opportunity indicates
total;visibilityindicates => total; visibility indicates
voiceindicates => voice indicates
evidenceyou've => evidence you've
be?Firstly,it's => be? Firstly, it's
and visit(because => and visit (because
Next,you => Next, you
money,such => money, such
numbersare => numbers are
theycould => they could
up,that's => up, that's
anoften => an often
colleaguethe => colleague the
asAmazon => as Amazon
site;some => site; some
wants;auserwho => wants; a user who
you'rebeing => you're being
thatdon't => that don't
system,the => system, the
foMowing:"209;ii6", => foMowing: "209;ii6", TODO CHECK THIS
convert.Now => convert. Now
indicatesthe => indicates the
moredetails => more details
events,including => events, including
buy,you => buy, you
listing.Let's => listing. Let's
lookslike => looks like
contentthat => content that
aremarked => are marked
page.The => page. The
one,called aindex,returns => one, called aindex, returns
views,you => views, you
implement,you => implement, you
3.9,hasfour KPIs => 3.9, has four KPIs
numberof => number of
they'regood => they're good
whoconvert => who convert



Under 3.1: 1So after University => 1So after University (space between 1 and S)
Under 3.1.1: withMovie GEEKs => with MovieGEEKs
Under 3.2.1: the focus is on conversions, drivers, and KPIs. which are explained in the following section. => the focus is on conversions, drivers, and KPIs, which are explained in the following section. (comma instead of .)
Under 3.2.3: To make things even more tricky => To make things even trickier (trickier is better)
Under 3.2.3: A lot of people open Amazon's home page They have a look => A lot of people open Amazon's home page. They have a look (add a . ???)

Chapter 4
Under 4.5: but it seemed like a good idea at the time. => But it seemed like a good idea at the time. (uppercase start of sentence?)
Under 4.5.1: you can define a implicit rating => you can define an implicit rating (missing n)
Under 4.5.1: There is a list of weights ... W1, W2, W1 ... the last should be W3. ALSO for the formula's to work right above it, W3 should be e.g. 20 and not 15 ... 3 x 15 = 45 which is not bigger than 50 (second rule)
Under 4.5.2: see chaper 4 => see chapter 4 (missing t)
Above Figure 4.7: because movies aren't not something => because movies aren't something (remove not)
Under Figure 4.7: To To be sure you understand what it's happening => To be sure you understand what it's happening (remove To once)
Page of Figure 4.7 at the bottom: created > 1 month ago => created < 1 month ago (less than a month ago???)
4.8: 4.8 Summary. => 4.8 Summary (remove .)
helen.stergius (9) [Avatar] Offline
#4
Hi all -
Manuscripts that are in MEAP are rough drafts that have not been copy edited, proofed, or professionally designed.

Be assured that we copy edit manuscripts before they go to print!

Thanks for your careful attention to detail, but now you know you can turn your attention to more entertaining or educational pursuits smilie