So this is what I have found up to the end of Unit 1, Lesson 1
Page 4, first sentence appears to be something missing:
"It might come as a surprise but to really understand Haskell's "hello world" requires."
Page 6, first line, 'interrupted' should be 'interpreted'
Section 0.4, first sentence, 'new comers' should be 'newcomers'
Section 0.4 (before 0.4.1), last sentence should "is that programs that come will work" be "is that programs that compile will work"?
Unit 1 (beginning), 2nd para, "However a computer built with Von Neumann Architecture not the only way" should be "However a computer built with Von Neumann Architecture is not the only way" (added 'is')
Page 11, last para, 2nd sentence, not sure what this means: "As a language Haskell commits fully to Backus's dream and does not allow you to start." Start what?
Page 12, at bottom in the side note about sqrt x, fourth sentence, not sure about the use of 'either' here. This and the following sentence may need re-wording. Also in the following sentence 'we' has been written with a capital W.
Figure 1.1, 'all function in Haskell' should be 'all functions in Haskell'.
Page 14, aside about Turing, 3rd sentence "This model also allows computer scientist to show" should either pluralise scientist or say 'a computer scientist'
Section 1.2, the link for the Church-Turing Thesis document is not well formed due to word wrap. It might be better to suggest how to find the document, e.g. 'go to www.alanturing.net or do an internet search for Church-Turing Thesis' rather than provide a direct link which may fail in the future as documents are moved around.
End of section 1.3, spot quiz. What is meant by '(function definition 1.1)'
End of Unit 1 Lesson 1 in the Answer to the Question, "This allows us wield..." should be "This allows us to wield..."
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