One general comment to all figures. I see that it looks you will not end captions with dot. There are still some figures with dot at the end. I noted all of them but will not post it here. Let me know if you want me to report also this.
Figure 3.1
Main layout of the start page for Internet Information Manager.
=> Main layout of the start page for Internet Information
Services Manager.
Chapter 3.1.1 (Configuration settings for the web server and website)
That list of icons grows add you add...
=> That list of icons grows
as you add...
Chapter 3.1.2
When showing cmdlets for IIS I'd stay with just
Get-Command -Module WebAdministration than to show the other two (even they are of course correct). But it's just my PowerShell thoughts
Chapter 3.1.2 (Try it now)
You may be tempted to keep eating and forgo this ...
=> You may be tempted to keep eating and forgo
t this ...
Dont forget to import the module first! .
=> Dont forget to import the module first!
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Chapter 3.2.2
When installing Web-ASP-NET I was not successful (missing sources), but I was able to install Web-ASP-NET45. Maybe it's just my issue with machine I have.
Chapter 3.2.3 (page 52)
#A - Request.ServerVariables(
) syntax will retrieve server variables and
display it to the web page.
=>
Should be in different font
Chapter 3.3.1 (Last sentence)
... server and on a network share. .
=> ... server and on a network share.
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Chapter 3.4.4
http://www.mycomapny.com/TestPage.aspx
=>
http://www.mycompany.com/TestPage.aspx