MEAP 11/02/2010
1) Listing 3.6
orig: "trait Updatable extends ReadOnly"
sounds contradictory
suggestion: "trait Updatable extends ReadingCollection"
2) First paragraph after listing 3.6
orig: "...then that the trait could only be mixed into a class"
redundant "the"
suggestion: "...then that trait could only be mixed into a class"
3) Last paragraph 4th line
orig: "Another way of think about Scala mixin is as decorators."
Alternative wording:
suggestion: "Another way to think about Scala mixins is as decorators." ----------------------------
Corrected MEAP version
Message was edited by: lutzhank
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