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mayankmishra (4) [Avatar] Offline
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On Page 11: "If we hadn't used this option, the file would be moved"
At first go, I got confused with the objective of operation, if we make it like below, this will be clear that the example shows a copying operation.
"If we hadn't used this option, the file would be moved, not copied"

On Page 16, section 1.4: (Heading) Camel's architecture => Camel's Architecture

On Page 16, section 1.4: "chapter 2 where we explore Camel's routing capabilities" => "chapter 2, where we explore Camel's routing capabilities"

On Page 17, section 1.4.2, table 1.2, description of "Components" service:
"In chapter 7 we will be" =>
"In chapter 7, we will be"


On Page 17, section 1.4.2, table 1.2, description of "Type Converters" service:
"Camel has a mechanism that allows you to easily or automatically..."
=>
"Camel has a mechanism that allows you to manually or automatically..."

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janstey (72) [Avatar] Offline
#2
Re: Phrasing: Chapter 1
Thanks for this. Most of the wordings you mentioned were caught in a recent copy edit by Manning. The last one was not though smilie so I'm getting this fixed now.

Cheers,
Jon
mayankmishra (4) [Avatar] Offline
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Re: Phrasing: Chapter 1
Page 26: Section 2.2 Understanding endpoints: "In this section we're going to detail" => "In this section, we're going to detail"

Page 27, 2.2.2, "What is JMS": "and has specific elements of reliability" => "and has specific properties of reliability". I guess properties is better word for describing behavioral attributes of reliability.

Page 33, Listing 2.1: I can see "public cl-ass", requires to be "public class"

Page 34, figure 2.8 and in the line above it: We can write "FTP Consumer" and "JMS Producer" to resolve some ambiguity which raises when we see Consumer feeding messages to Producer.

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